2022-01-16來源:海文考研
Directions:
Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the follow drawing. In your essay you should
1) describe the drawing briefly,
2) explain its intended meaning, and then
3) give your comments.
You should write neatly on ANSWER SHEET2. (20poims)
參考范文
As is shown in the shocking picture, two tourists are siting on a boat, chatting and eating while throwing their rubbish into the lake with littler and waste floating on it. The drawing sets us into thinking its far-reaching implication.
The symbolic meaning conveyed by the picture is that some people in our life still lack the awareness of environmental protection, thus such unpleasant scene can be seen occasionally, especially in scenic spots. Why does this arise? Many factors account for it. First and foremost, there is still a long way to go for environmental conservation, since it needs time before all the people autonomously have the awareness of protecting environment and apply it to routine life. Some may not think it a big deal to throw rubbish everywhere. In addition, the environmental management system isn’t so perfect. For example, in some places constraining regulations are in absence, if any, and the implementation still lacks enforcement.
From what has been discussed above, it is urgent to take some immediate and effective measures. On one hand, we should continue to expand promotions in communities and schools so as to bring people into realization of the importance of protecting environment. On the other hand, more rules should be made and carried out by authorities concerned to restrain environmental damage. People must work in joint efforts to create sustainable surroundings.
寫作思路:
一. 審題立意
要求
(1)描述圖片
(2)闡釋含義
(3)進(jìn)行評論
二. 布局成文
總體框架:
開始段 3-4句
1. As is shown in the shocking picture, ...
2. 描述具體圖片細(xì)節(jié)
中間段
闡釋含義 4-5句
1. 主題句
The symbolic meaning conveyed by the picture is that ...
2. 展開論證
First and foremost, ...
In addition, ...
舉例論證
For example, ...
結(jié)尾段
給出評論 3-4句
1. 提出看法與建議
From what has been discussed above, it is urgent to ...
On one hand, ...
On the other hand, ...
2. 包裝結(jié)尾,展望未來
People must work in joint efforts to ...
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