Directions:

Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the follow drawing. In your essay you should

1) Describe the drawing briefly,

2) Explain its intended meaning, and

3) Give your comments.

You should write neatly on ANSWER SHEET2. (20poims)

參考范文

Do you sill remember the good old days when we sat at a table, chatting, joking and laughing? If so，we may now deem it a regret to sit in the same restaurant，typing messages or browsing webs by mobile phones, without any conversation with friends at the same table. In the picture, these four young people are demonstrating us the sorrow-concentrating on the messages from the screen but ignoring face-to-face communication among friends.

The cartoon endows us a heavy understanding that mobile Internet terminals, the technology invented to draw us near, actually set us apart. Ten years ago, we were desperate for a way, such as a visual mobile phone, to skim through news going on in the world, or to hear the voices or see the images of friends who were oceans apart or of strangers who were appealing to us. Nowadays, with the development of mobile Internet communication, the way we longed for is around us, presenting all the messages before us. However, these messages cut off our communication with people who sit next to us.

It is not the technology o be blamed, bu the way we use it! That is, we should use it reasonably. Admittedly, mobile Internet communication is valuable because of its convenience and efficiency. Too much indulgence in the message or leisure it supplies, nonetheless, may separate us from the real social surroundings. Therefore, we should remind ourselves and people around not to get lost in the mobile digital world.

寫(xiě)作思路：

一. 審題立意

要求

（1）描述圖片

（2）闡釋含義

（3）進(jìn)行評(píng)論

二. 布局成文

總體框架：

開(kāi)始段 3-4句

1. 引入話題

Do you sill remember the good old days when ...

2. 描述具體圖片細(xì)節(jié)

In the picture, ...

3. 可補(bǔ)充圖片底部說(shuō)明文字

Under the picture lies a caption: ...

中間段

闡釋含義 4-5句

1. 主題句

The cartoon endows us a heavy understanding that ...

2. 展開(kāi)論證，今昔對(duì)比

Ten years ago, ...

Nowadays, ...

However, ...

結(jié)尾段

給出評(píng)論 3-4句

1. 總結(jié)利弊

Admittedly, mobile Internet communication is valuable because of ...

Too much indulgence in ... may separate us from the real social surroundings.

2. 提出看法與建議

Therefore, we should remind ourselves and people around not to ...

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